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Pathogen

May 20, 2011, 5:10:08 PM by ~CartheInsane
Literature / Poetry / Emotional / Free Verse

You like to pretend
that it didn't hurt,
when you tore my lungs
with a silver trowel

My pain is so pretty,
iconic, innovative;
my diaphragm
just a pulsing dragonfly

The light in my eyes
just something to squeeze,
pathetically gorgeous,
desperate need of disease

Stretch my vocal cords,
until I cannot utter, mutter,
make a sound, nor blither
but instead erotically wither

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Dry

May 10, 2011, 4:45:49 PM by ~CartheInsane
Literature / Poetry / Horror / Traditional Fixed Forms

Flesh crawls off of hollow white,
drained by undead mastication.
Frail, midst of eclipsing night,
snapping under provocation.

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I'm Just Saying Perhaps I am wrong about your intentions, but I won't let you get close enough to me to prove me right. I'm Just Saying by ~CartheInsane

Smother Embers, soak me
soak into me, deep.

Oh please, I beg,
tarnish this tissue
that I might feel [you].

Flutter inside,
wingless angel;
haunt.

Peel away lungs with needles.

If I burn my skin,
I will burn the lies.Smother by ~CartheInsane

Fae Fae tears
haunt not
the branches
of this willow.

Dance fair
with gentle
aggression,
quiet loudness.

Listen with your eyes
and let not your ears
out of focus.

This night is
actually quite old,
older than time itself,
telling. Fae by ~CartheInsane

Naked Shadow of eye,
crowned by night,
blur
echoes of sound, bright

Smell of dusk,
the musk of longing

exposed. Naked by ~CartheInsane

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People Are Worn Out Shadows

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Does the structure work or detract from the poem itself? And how's the flow? Is it clear? I will attempt to go stanza by stanza and ...

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Shower Curtain

by ~Vindicta38

I will start by saying this poem certainly has some original elements in it, which is what's good about this poem (not that all good po...

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Ancestry x-draft2-x

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Here, a lot of the descriptions are very well written. I like the dated lines and faded photographs, it describes a lot. A faded life, ...

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Love Cavity

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I like the idea of the first stanza, but I feel, overall it could use a bit of touch up. As for the text being smaller, I think as long...

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~LoveShotEyes 5 days ago

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=dreamyangelgirl Dec 24, 2011

You are a truly talented writer. Hope you have a Merry Christmas!

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*artiskewl Dec 17, 2011

My apologies for the obscenely late reply, but thank you so much for the fave on Autumn!

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~After-Eden Nov 14, 2011

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