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Palm to palm...   
The rain washed over us. The kind of rain that soaks through all the layers. Settling deep within you. Cleanses the soul. And here we are, in nothing more than night clothes, fingers laced, eyes closed, standing in the rain.   
Body to body...   
Every sense was attuned to the growing proximity. Drunk off the very nearness of you. Aware of the building heat between us as we huddled closer for warmth. Arms tangled around eachother, cheeks pink, grinning. Not needing to speak. Content.   
Breath to breath...   
Evidence of our laughter fogging the air between us. Wispy trails
Heartbeat To Heartbeat
by *OctoberAzriel

This is so beautiful. I am left stunned. Favorite line: So many breaths and yet my lungs are not empty. That line is so magnificent....

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You haven't lived until you've heard Heart-Shaped Box  On an old CD/Cassette boombox  Cobain shouts his complaint  Meat-eating orchids drag me under  A generation of long-lost angst  A lesson learned I won't soon forget   
It wasn't all worthless...   
Sue us for our piracy  Share your love with me  Deny I never existed  Cigarette burns on my this  
I love you and I am not   
You can't really bleed unless your anemic  Otherwise you're fake and don't know it  You've been flogged by licorice whips so long  You've forgotten what it tastes like to hear a rea
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by =Vindicta38

I think the last stanza that is repeated 3 times throughout the poem is a good stanza, BUT I think 2 repetitions would be enough. I thi...

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So I'm pretty sure I'm done with...

Thu Oct 29, 2009, 2:18 PM
  • Mood: Content
...Cartheinsane's connection. I dunno, I've been waiting for almost 2 months for more submissions and it just hasn't happened.

Thank you to the few of you who showed interest. And thank you...

:iconamuris: The only person who submitted an entry for this connection/challenge. [link]

Yeah. I'm not really angry. I mean, I maybe thought I was a bit, but I mean, people are busy. I'm disappointed :shrug:. Admittedly, though it takes something else off my mind. To be fair, though...it felt like it was off my mind long ago.

The whole project lost enthusiasm, which I don't blame anyone, considering they could be spending their time making artwork for contests... and win something.

I guess what I'm trying to say is I don't want to continue making challenges for something that's barely happening or not going to happen. I'd rather just go on to posting articles featuring favorite works of art. :shrug:

R.I.P. Cartheinsane's Connection. I'm surprised you lasted this long. #16 was incomplete. Maybe if people want to do the most recent one and enough people still do it I'll post a feature, but I WILL NOT do any more challenge posts. I'm tired of doing it anyway. ^^;

Speaking of contests, ~Satah is still doing her contest! I recommend joining it! I did. ;) [link]

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~TheCoalMineCanary 1 day 19 hours ago
Hi there.
Liking the looks of your gallery, so I'm going to go ahead and watch you. Hope you don't mind. :D

And thank you, ever so much, for the kind feature on "She's a Poet." It means a lot to me. :giggle:

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my gallery :gallery: :dalove:
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*Blueskye27 Nov 1, 2009, 10:10:42 AM
Thank you for the :+fav:. :heart:
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~maxwerx Nov 1, 2009, 8:56:25 AM
Thank you for adding my stuff to your favorites. :-)

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A fool's fool fools fools who foolishly accept the foolishness of a fool's fool. - Franziska

Fine. Ignore my evidence. See if I care. - Apollo

Note to self: Gossip with Maya about this later. - Phoenix Wright
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^LadyLincoln Oct 29, 2009, 9:37:16 PM
Thank you kindly for :+fav:ing my poem Frailty, I am very pleased that it spoke to you.

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