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Affection by =CartheInsane:iconCartheInsane:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Open


If I could spread
affection far
across the world
with the blow of
a dandelion,
I would.

I would so love
to watch the white
puffs float to meet
their destination.

I want to see more eyes,
lighting up like fireflies;
finding their way home.
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If I could give affection to the world...

I know I haven't posted in a few days, but I didn't want to feel like I HAVE to write. You know? I want to do it when I truly feel like it. I have many messages again, I know. I'm hoping you guys can be patient with me while I pick through them. :heart:

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=Vindicta38 Nov 9, 2009, 10:36:42 AM
:wow:

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Words do my bidding! ....... Sometimes...
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~Wayward-Man Nov 9, 2009, 12:29:45 PM
You write when you want to lass...and my...this is lovely. The end is especially beautiful.

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The world spins while I lie still...
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=CYCOB Nov 9, 2009, 1:20:10 PM
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww :glomp:

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this is me everyday no compromise so to map it out you must look inside sure books can guide you but your heart defines you" :phonecall:
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Mood: Love =th3krimzon1 Nov 9, 2009, 2:47:33 PM
This is amazing. And featured. And suggested for a DD. yes. All of those things.

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*Chemical-Shrimp Nov 9, 2009, 3:04:34 PM
Wow... :iconspeechlessplz:

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:music:The terror held in wedding bells
The comfort in there's no one else
The truth be told I'm never gonna know:music:
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~Marianne-Art-World Nov 9, 2009, 3:20:07 PM
:tighthug: :heart:

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An artist cannot fail; it is a success to be one. :)
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~Tsirachel Nov 9, 2009, 4:58:47 PM
I like it a lot. I think it would be better if you took the word 'so' out of it. It makes the phrase more important. But it might take away from the voice. I don't know!
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Mood: Love *denimandfrills Nov 9, 2009, 5:39:26 PM
Spectacular. Keep up the great work. :clap:

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"Life goes by so damn fast. All that work we did. The detail we killed ourselves trying to perfect. In the end it all just gets lost in one big goddamned blur."- Katherine Dudinsky
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~noisybubbles Nov 9, 2009, 6:46:43 PM
This is beautiful. So concise, yet so striking. Absolutely beautiful :aww:

:+fav:
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~EternalFreedom Nov 10, 2009, 2:19:33 AM
amazing work :heart:

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“And if waking up alone in a car is about as good as it gets I'll know I did my best, I know I did my best to be yours.”

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