My heart is a room
with an open window;
the autumn wind
is freezing it
from the inside-
leaves slip in
to fill the void.
My heart is a room with an open window; the autumn wind is freezing it from the inside- leaves slip in to fill the void. |

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Well, I have two.
One's good and one's bad. The good one is that the leaves are a potential lover or something well, like, IDK, maybe a date or something... but something still sucks like a death or something... Okay, I misread it at first and some how skipped the line about the coldness inside... So the interpretations are mainly based on the leaves XD. Then the bad is that the leaves are something like mindless sex or something and trying to kill the emotional pain by mere physical recreational activities o.o... Please can you tell me the intended one xD? I know this is way off... I'll have another think about it and take into consideration the entire thing...(I have a terrible tendency to skip out random sentences and stuff sub-conciously while reading...) EMZ=] -- Umm... chips Ooh~ I kind of see the leaves in a positive way, like they're not slipping in to fill the void because their cruel, but because they're caring ^^
-- yuujyou wa kokoro no chuugi ~ The hearts loyalty is friendship. |
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