You break her heart
And I'll break you
Just like you broke me
You better love her
More than you love me
If that's what you call it
You're stuck
with your own reflection,
with a past
you can't bare to see
The past better not repeat
You better be good to her,
because to watch her cry
would be hell
You dare
To put tears in her eyes
And you'll never dare again
You break her heart
And I'll break you
Just like you broke me
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Well, this particular poem/song is based off of the fact that one of my ex boy friends started to date one of my good friends and all I know is he better not break her heart.
Update: Here is the previous version: You break her heart And I'll break you Just like you broke me You better love her More than you love me If that's what you call it Stuck in a mirror Looking at a reflection Turning from the past you can't bare to see The past better not repeat You better be good to her to watch her cry would be hell would be hell You dare To put tears in her eyes And you'll never dare again You break her heart And I'll break you Just like you broke me I put in bold what was taken out/changed. The most. As you can see I italicized some lines as well. |
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Good things come to those who wait~
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i love it, and id love to use it in a song
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-Never look at Defeat... if you want to keep ahead.
-Never leave the one you love for the one you lust, cause the one you lust will leave you for the one they love.
-A forced smile dose not stop the world from beating you for pleasure
well... i hope he doesn't hurt her either... you must be a v. caring friend!
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well done, yet again you've portrayed your feelings perfectly!
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