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You break her heart
And I'll break you
Just like you broke me

You better love her
More than you love me
If that's what you call it

You're stuck
with your own reflection,
with a past
you can't bare to see

The past better not repeat

You better be good to her,
because to watch her cry
would be hell

You dare
To put tears in her eyes
And you'll never dare again

You break her heart
And I'll break you
Just like you broke me
©2006-2010 =CartheInsane
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Author's Comments

Well, this particular poem/song is based off of the fact that one of my ex boy friends started to date one of my good friends and all I know is he better not break her heart.

Update:
Here is the previous version:
You break her heart
And I'll break you
Just like you broke me

You better love her
More than you love me
If that's what you call it

Stuck in a mirror
Looking at a reflection
Turning from the past
you can't bare to see

The past better not repeat
You better be good to her
to watch her cry
would be hell
would be hell

You dare
To put tears in her eyes
And you'll never dare again

You break her heart
And I'll break you
Just like you broke me

I put in bold what was taken out/changed. The most. As you can see I italicized some lines as well.

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=CartheInsane Oct 20, 2006, 9:29:43 AM
Well yes, I truly missed DA ... it sucked not being able to go on here for awhile.

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~I am a poet~
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=CartheInsane Oct 20, 2006, 9:32:48 AM
if you bought me one or 2 of the things on my wish list maybe... and gave me credit for the song X-D and told people how to find more stuff that I write :-D

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~I am a poet~
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=CartheInsane Oct 20, 2006, 9:33:11 AM
why thank you :)

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~I am a poet~
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=CartheInsane Oct 20, 2006, 9:33:47 AM
Well, maybe only a little bit, but I mostly care for my friend's well being

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~I am a poet~
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~ElementalFae Oct 20, 2006, 9:35:31 AM
i'd rather not be guessing right now, so you should just tell. (although i probably could guess, i don't want to). :)

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=CartheInsane Oct 20, 2006, 9:51:07 AM
His name starts with a "B" lol XD and now you know

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~I am a poet~
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~soulpaste Oct 20, 2006, 9:52:18 AM
seeming as i dont have any money, i cant to the first thing lol ... worth a try =D

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=CartheInsane Oct 20, 2006, 10:00:57 AM
LOL ^_______________^

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~I am a poet~
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~Stricken001 Oct 20, 2006, 2:15:42 PM
hehe Anytime :)

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-Never leave the one you love for the one you lust, cause the one you lust will leave you for the one they love.
-A forced smile dose not stop the world from beating you for pleasure
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