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You break her heart
And I'll break you
Just like you broke me

You better love her
More than you love me
If that's what you call it

You're stuck
with your own reflection,
with a past
you can't bare to see

The past better not repeat

You better be good to her,
because to watch her cry
would be hell

You dare
To put tears in her eyes
And you'll never dare again

You break her heart
And I'll break you
Just like you broke me
©2006-2010 =CartheInsane
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Author's Comments

Well, this particular poem/song is based off of the fact that one of my ex boy friends started to date one of my good friends and all I know is he better not break her heart.

Update:
Here is the previous version:
You break her heart
And I'll break you
Just like you broke me

You better love her
More than you love me
If that's what you call it

Stuck in a mirror
Looking at a reflection
Turning from the past
you can't bare to see

The past better not repeat
You better be good to her
to watch her cry
would be hell
would be hell

You dare
To put tears in her eyes
And you'll never dare again

You break her heart
And I'll break you
Just like you broke me

I put in bold what was taken out/changed. The most. As you can see I italicized some lines as well.

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=CartheInsane Mar 22, 2007, 4:41:19 PM
you're welcome :)

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~I am a poet~
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~bumblemini Jan 24, 2008, 10:18:16 PM
omgg it's so sweet that you care for your friend. i would totally call her a back stabber if she dates my ex :P

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Everyone has a story to tell :)
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=CartheInsane Feb 2, 2008, 8:47:51 PM
LOL. Well she's not with him now so that makes me really happy that she doesn't have to suffer dating him... and now she hates him too. I was more worried for her because... well he's really a jerk... and very unstable... and way too indecisive with what he wants and that's not even half of his problems.

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~I am a poet~
:iconbumblemini:
~bumblemini Feb 15, 2008, 7:38:56 PM
ohh. haha cool (:

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Everyone has a story to tell :)
:iconcartheinsane:
=CartheInsane Mar 6, 2008, 2:48:17 PM
Yup. It most certainly is. :)

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~I am a poet~
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~Towelie-Vampire May 8, 2008, 2:40:25 AM
OMG esact same thing as me and i know that my ex is a liar and a cheat and i shud have listened to my friend be4 he went out with me.

this poem has inspired me loads and no i can think straight again x

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Even When The Last Rose Wilts And Dies My Feelings For You Shall Never Change xxx
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=CartheInsane May 8, 2008, 12:43:38 PM
I'm glad it inspired you. :)

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~I am a poet~
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~acidtearseternate Jun 2, 2008, 1:41:50 AM
In a word, beautiful.

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The universe we created
So complex in its simplicity
Fell to ruin
And both of us, we too
Fell
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=CartheInsane Jun 2, 2008, 12:32:13 PM
Thank you so much, thanks for adding this to your favorites! :)

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~I am a poet~
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=platinummyr Nov 17, 2008, 12:33:05 PM
Yeah, well...

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*TheWritersMeow
A birthday is just a day, you say.
But it's a special day.
It's the day you first changed the world.
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