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Delicious by =CartheInsane:iconCartheInsane:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Experimental > Surrealism


Candle wax skin;
smooth, slippery.
I love how my skin glows
when my wick is lit.  

When can I eat the sky?
I do so want to feel
the texture as it
slips down this
potato sack throat of mine.
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Watching surreal cartoons, so I thought I'd make a really random surreal poem.

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*DogmaticKerr Nov 1, 2009, 5:21:44 PM
:blushes: maybe it's just my mood, but this is incredibly sexy to me :worship:

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Loveless
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=CartheInsane Nov 1, 2009, 5:23:37 PM
:lol: That's awesome. :XD:

Thank you very much for the favorite. :D

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~I am a poet~
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*DogmaticKerr Nov 1, 2009, 5:25:39 PM
:blushes: Gosh, I'm glad you think so, because I wasn't sure if it was the intention at all or if I was just imprinting my mood on there ;P The first stanza is definitely very sexy to me - sensually suggestive. The second is such a wonderful image, the way it's worded... :heart: a very warm, embraced feeling ;P

:love: And you're welcome dear

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Loveless
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=CartheInsane Nov 1, 2009, 5:33:20 PM
I didn't intend it originally, but before I posted it I could see how it could be that way, at least for the first stanza. Then when I saw your comment I re-read my poem again and realized that it together as a whole could be taken kind of dirty. :XD:

You are welcome to interpret it as you wish. :nod: I have no problem with you taking it the way you take it. I'm actually happy that it could bring a reaction. :aww:

I'm glad I can be sexy without intending to. :blush:

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~I am a poet~
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=CYCOB Nov 1, 2009, 5:37:20 PM
lmao i thought it was sexual too ;) fav'd

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this is me everyday no compromise so to map it out you must look inside sure books can guide you but your heart defines you" :phonecall:
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*DogmaticKerr Nov 1, 2009, 5:53:46 PM
:giggl: Oh my gosh! I thought the same thing! :lmao: Oh my, now I just feel dirty myself! :giggle:

:blushes: Thank you for allowing for that freedom miss, I really do appreciate it :heart: especially now ;)

And awwwww :giggle: I'm sure you do it a lot more often than you think :) really, truly, sexy piece you got here :love:

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Loveless
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=CartheInsane Nov 1, 2009, 6:33:57 PM
Haha. :XD: Thanks.

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~I am a poet~
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