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Despair under moonlight by =CartheInsane:iconCartheInsane:



My little darling,
blackened by the moonlight night;
somehow your skin is
falling into shadows, into shadows.

Little pieces of the moon
fall into your eyes;
the stars escape
into the curls of your hair.

The sunlight flowers of your irises
have gone out.
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Author's Comments

I actually quite like this one. It just sort of came out while listening to "System of a down" (their self-titled album). :XD:

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:icongoldengirls:
Absolutely wonderful :heart: I love the imagery; you've taken something which could have become a cliche and made it unique and shimmering with emotion. Those last to lines are quite stunning :love: Awesomesauce.
xxxxxx

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You fill your day, most of the time, by being in the washing machine of your own mind, thinking “what’s this, when does it stop, am I enjoying it, I don’t know, oh it’s time to go to sleep, I can’t, I’m worried.”
- Dylan Moran
:iconcartheinsane:
Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it! :hug:

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~I am a poet~
:iconcsnyder:
wow, very nice
you paint a wonderful image with words:heart:
:iconcartheinsane:
Thank you very much! Thanks for the favorite!

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~I am a poet~
:iconcsnyder:
youre welcome, well deserved indeed
:iconflowness:

I agree with =CSnyder. It's wondeful.
:iconcartheinsane:
Thank you very much for the favorite and watch. :hug:

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~I am a poet~

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