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Despair under moonlight by =CartheInsane:iconCartheInsane:



My little darling,
blackened by the moonlight night;
somehow your skin is
falling into shadows, into shadows.

Little pieces of the moon
fall into your eyes;
the stars escape
into the curls of your hair.

The sunlight flowers of your irises
have gone out.
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Author's Comments

I actually quite like this one. It just sort of came out while listening to "System of a down" (their self-titled album). :XD:

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:iconxoshushuxo:
you are very welcome :hug:

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"I would face any horror and overcome my darkest fears just to hear your voice before i go to sleep..."

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:iconchocolate71:
it's lovely! i'm certainly going to check out your gallery :)
:iconcartheinsane:
Thank you very very very much! :)

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~I am a poet~
:iconincubustrav421:
diction sways away from what inspired you (SOAD) but i still love the tranquil feeling i get reading. Lovely :)

- ... out
:iconcartheinsane:
Thank you very much. :)

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~I am a poet~
:iconsouless-journey:
That's amazing i love your work
:iconcartheinsane:
Thank you. :)

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~I am a poet~
:iconplatinummyr:
Hmm. Lovely metaphors, and good use of imagery.

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*TheWritersMeow
A birthday is just a day, you say.
But it's a special day.
It's the day you first changed the world.
:iconcartheinsane:
Thank you very much. :)

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~I am a poet~
:iconloopy-lexy:
Wonderful :heart:

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you are my sweetest downfall
i loved you first

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