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Despair under moonlight by =CartheInsane:iconCartheInsane:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Experimental > Surrealism


My little darling,
blackened by the moonlight night;
somehow your skin is
falling into shadows, into shadows.

Little pieces of the moon
fall into your eyes;
the stars escape
into the curls of your hair.

The sunlight flowers of your irises
have gone out.
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Author's Comments

I actually quite like this one. It just sort of came out while listening to "System of a down" (their self-titled album). :XD:

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=CartheInsane Jul 30, 2009, 5:04:34 PM
Thank you very much. :)

--
~I am a poet~
:iconloopy-lexy:
*loopy-lexy Jul 30, 2009, 5:10:52 PM
=]

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you are my sweetest downfall
i loved you first
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*oneofthose-rachels Aug 15, 2009, 9:15:44 PM
this is such a beautiful and striking piece.
"the stars escape
into the curls of your hair."
that line is a huge standout for me, i love it!
:heart:

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we were across the room from each other. it was sunday, it was crowded. the shops were roiling with people in screaming lookatme colours. a swelling drone-murmur was our blanket.our eyes met. we stared.

then we looked away.
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=CartheInsane Aug 16, 2009, 8:27:38 AM
Thanks! Thank you for the favorite and the watch. :)

--
~I am a poet~
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~theThanatos Sep 17, 2009, 6:09:40 AM
Beautifully written :] :heart:
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=CartheInsane Sep 17, 2009, 7:00:01 PM
Thank you for the favorite on it! :wow:

--
~I am a poet~
:iconthethanatos:
~theThanatos Sep 17, 2009, 9:45:42 PM
haha no problem :]
it was well deserved.
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~kittykittyhunter Oct 19, 2009, 5:43:12 AM
The imagery in this is so pretty. All those elements of the night brought together in that person... and I love how delicate that final stanza is. You've got that lovely contrast with "sunlight" - as though night has overpowered the day. Beautiful.

--
yuujyou wa kokoro no chuugi

~ The heart’s loyalty is friendship.
:iconcartheinsane:
=CartheInsane Oct 19, 2009, 6:56:35 AM
Thank you. :heart:

--
~I am a poet~
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