I am dissevered
divided
and broken apart
into tiny little pieces
like a crumbling pie
on the plate
where I wait
to be eaten
like I always am
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Dissever verb (used with object) 1. to sever; separate. 2. to divide into parts. –verb (used without object) 3. to part; separate. Comments
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What a gorgeous word. +fav.  -- Cuckuhim 'o 'ab him. Wepeghim 'o 'abai him. Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed the poem! Thanks for the favorite.
 -- ~I am a writer~ Aw, you're welcome and you're welcome!!
^^ -- Cuckuhim 'o 'ab him. Wepeghim 'o 'abai him. Hehe
 -- ~I am a writer~  I always like how you use similes... It really does bring out powerful images, especially when you link them with another action. Being dissevered crumbled and then eaten.
Powerful as always lass. -- The world spins while I lie still...  Why use dissevered when severed means the same thing?!
I mean, yeah it's a different word. It's fine that you used it, I just question it's existence as a word  -- *TheWritersMeow A birthday is just a day, you say. But it's a special day. It's the day you first changed the world. Thank youuu
-- ~I am a writer~ Yeah I know. I think it's just there to sound cool.
-- ~I am a writer~ True, true.-- *TheWritersMeow A birthday is just a day, you say. But it's a special day. It's the day you first changed the world. |
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