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Left as an ungulate
creature, treading
the fields till they're
bare.

My eyes as dry as
the ground I trot
over.

I should use
these hooves
to flee.

I give
until
there is nothing
left of me.
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Like a horse.

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~Wayward-Man Oct 30, 2009, 3:21:46 PM
You ever wonder if a horse ever thought...why?

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The world spins while I lie still...
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=platinummyr Oct 30, 2009, 11:03:19 PM
:hug: That last line is very striking. A frightening though.

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=underworldriver Oct 31, 2009, 12:31:28 PM
:heart:

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=CartheInsane Nov 1, 2009, 4:37:23 PM
I'm glad it was powerful enough for you to say something. :hug: ;)

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~I am a poet~
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=CartheInsane Nov 1, 2009, 4:37:42 PM
Horses are pretty damn intelligent. :heart:

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~I am a poet~
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=platinummyr Nov 1, 2009, 9:41:31 PM
*thought*

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*TheWritersMeow
A birthday is just a day, you say.
But it's a special day.
It's the day you first changed the world.
:iconcartheinsane:
=CartheInsane Nov 11, 2009, 7:17:26 PM
Hmmm? :XD: You confuse me sometimes.

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~I am a poet~
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=platinummyr Nov 11, 2009, 8:37:45 PM
xD, I mispelled thought on my first comment XDD

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*TheWritersMeow
A birthday is just a day, you say.
But it's a special day.
It's the day you first changed the world.
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