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My eyes are crystal;
scraping against the howling wind;
it moves and speaks to me
about the tree angels,
the tree angels
that will grant me wings
to fly
above the screeching ocean
that opens its mouth wide
to swallow me up;
to pull me down deeper
and deeper
into oblivion.
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This is one of my favorite poems that I've written. :)

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:iconcartheinsane:
Thanks for the fave!

Thank you...your comments are always appreciated. :hug:

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~I am a poet~
:iconcartheinsane:
Thanks so much for the fave! :glomp:

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~I am a poet~
:iconoctoberazriel:
Anytime.:)

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"Here's our only conversation we've ever had without using our words to show. And our love is a creation of all the things that
have ever had a chance to grow."

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:iconoctoberazriel:
Very interesting...I like to paint pictures in my mind using poetry is why I ask.

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"Here's our only conversation we've ever had without using our words to show. And our love is a creation of all the things that
have ever had a chance to grow."

Charades - Stephen Jerzak
:iconth3krimzon1:
thats what i thought too!!

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:iconth3krimzon1:
your writing has grown so much in the last 6 months lil sister. :)

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Writers Block is my Arch Nemesis. It is Evil, and must be Destroyed.

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:iconincubustrav421:
no problem, wonderful poem indeed :)

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:iconcartheinsane:
Thank you :hug:

And thanks so much for the fave! :hug:

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~I am a poet~

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