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My eyes are crystal;
scraping against the howling wind;
it moves and speaks to me
about the tree angels,
the tree angels
that will grant me wings
to fly
above the screeching ocean
that opens its mouth wide
to swallow me up;
to pull me down deeper
and deeper
into oblivion.
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This is one of my favorite poems that I've written. :)

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:iconaillesdors:
:-) 'kay!

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"Oh let me think it is not quite in vain
To sigh out sonnets to the midnight air"

~ Keats, "To Hope"
:iconwayward-man:
There's something about this...that...is just captivating. I absolutely love it. I'd critique it as best I can but I think it's perfect as is. ^^
:iconcartheinsane:
Thank you so much. :hug: This is probably one of my top favorites that I have written. Thanks for the favorite! :)

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~I am a poet~
:iconwayward-man:
No, thank you for writing it! ^^ And keep it up! Your quite talented lass. ^^
:iconcartheinsane:
Thank you. :hug:

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~I am a poet~
:iconcartheinsane:
It makes me happy knowing more and more people like this poem.

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~I am a poet~
:iconcartheinsane:
Thanks! :)

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~I am a poet~
:icongilded-cxnt:
i love the imagery in this.
:)

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(i need more grace than i thought.)
:iconcartheinsane:
Thank you very much. :)

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~I am a poet~

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