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My eyes are crystal;
scraping against the howling wind;
it moves and speaks to me
about the tree angels,
the tree angels
that will grant me wings
to fly
above the screeching ocean
that opens its mouth wide
to swallow me up;
to pull me down deeper
and deeper
into oblivion.
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This is one of my favorite poems that I've written. :)

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:iconannika-86:
Lovely, very well done ;)
:iconcartheinsane:
Thank you very much for the favorite. :)

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~I am a poet~
:iconxoshushuxo:
My eyes are crystal
scraping against the howling wind

i absolutely adore these lines
this is poem is very easy to visualize, i love it ^^

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"I would face any horror and overcome my darkest fears just to hear your voice before i go to sleep..."

"Control your fate, colour your dreams"

~silverstitch
:iconcartheinsane:
Thank you very much! It's like one of my favorites that I've written...I'm very proud of it. :) :hug:

--
~I am a poet~
:iconxoshushuxo:
you should be, it's beautiful :hug:

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"I would face any horror and overcome my darkest fears just to hear your voice before i go to sleep..."

"Control your fate, colour your dreams"

~silverstitch
:iconcartheinsane:
Thank you! :aww:

--
~I am a poet~
:iconxoshushuxo:
no prob :hug:

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"I would face any horror and overcome my darkest fears just to hear your voice before i go to sleep..."

"Control your fate, colour your dreams"

~silverstitch
:iconalways-try:
Woah, amazing!!! I love the emotion and feelings you portray in the poem. It definately has a surrealistic feel to it.
Awesome work!!! :D

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:iconcartheinsane:
Thank you very much! I'm very proud of this poem. :)

--
~I am a poet~

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