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You find yourself in an enchanted place, but you don’t know quite how you got there.
You checked all your pockets, and both of your shoes and they all appeared to be bare.
Upon a branch you see a man; his skin was a tint of gray.
He tipped his hat, and called you a friend; his spirit quite merry and gay.
His skin showed scars, which made you confused, how could he be in this way?
It was gloomy and cloudy which made him amused, where was the joy in today?
He gave you an apple which looked all quite sweet; you ate it – all happy and free.
You were so happy and joyful and free, that you jumped to land upon tree.

“Wait” said the gray man, “I have something to say”
“If you don’t make one eat this, you’ll die in one day.”
You saw on your arms scars, just like that man’s skin.
You turned the same color and saw that man grin.
The man continued smiling and his skin was not scarred.
His un-graying skin was no longer marred.
You screamed “It’s not fair! I was nothing but bait!”
He said, “But it is… and now it’s your fate…”
©2006-2009 =CartheInsane
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Author's Comments

Well I began writing this last night and I wrote it... because I just couldn't stop writing. Well I hope you like it. Enjoy.

Edit on December 07 2008: An old poem of mine that's kind of cute. Hope you enjoy it even though its not my best.

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:iconstricken001:
hehe the ends very catchy

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I’ve been burning in water and drowning in flame. To prove you wrong and scare you away. I admit my defeat and walk back home, you heart under the rose.
:iconcartheinsane:
Thanks ^^

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~I am a poet~
:iconkaiyou-kaze:
OMG! THAT IS THE COOLEST PROSE I'VE EVER READ! I LOVE IT! *Faves!* ^_^

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"You're a team player, a save the day superhero... I hate people like you."

Kaiyou-Kaze says: ~Invader-Lil is officially my #1 fangirl! SHOW HER SOME LUFF! 'Kay? ^_^
:iconcartheinsane:
awww thank you:) :hug: :cuddle:

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~I am a poet~
:iconzioseberrun:
not really prose... but clever nonetheless :)
:iconcartheinsane:
yeah, I tried to make it like Dr. Suess kind of... ^^ lol

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~I am a poet~
:iconzioseberrun:
dr. suess is genius. :)
:iconkaiyou-kaze:
You're welcome! :hug: :cuddle: :cling:

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"You're a team player, a save the day superhero... I hate people like you."

Kaiyou-Kaze says: ~Invader-Lil is officially my #1 fangirl! SHOW HER SOME LUFF! 'Kay? ^_^

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