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Cliche moments of an overused mind
scattered among the pages
feeling broken and blind

Thrown among
the depths of the sea

The pathways in the mind pulsing
A word is written and then another

Until a masterpiece is formed
And other minds can finally enjoy
the page of words before them

Trite, but loved without question
after all, who needs emotion
when you have sappy words
that mimic the same feeling?
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I like!

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To see a world in a grain of sand,And a heaven in a wild flower,Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,An eternity in an hour.-William Blake
:( my sappy has emotion...:tears:
Something vexes thee? lol

I already said I agree with ya,lol
I like too!!

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Writers Block is my Arch Nemesis. It is Evil, and must be Destroyed.

=RawEm0tion
~Lyrics-Community
LOL, thanks for the fave! :)
:love:

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Writers Block is my Arch Nemesis. It is Evil, and must be Destroyed.

=RawEm0tion
~Lyrics-Community
This is so how I feel most of the time anymore. Writer's block is a BITCH.

Lovely poem, you've got great flow.


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If all else perished, and he remained, I should still continue to be; and if all else remained, and he were annihilated, the universe would turn to a mighty stranger: I should not seem a part of it. - Wuthering Heights, Emily Brontë
I feel the same about a the sappy words mimicking real emotions. Also, I feel something about reading here that I relate to as well.

Great piece! :nod:

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“A word of advice from one Reaper to another,” Kyniel took a defensive stance, “never let your ego get the best of you.”
The Realm Within
Thanks for the fave and the watch! :)

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