Paper moth wings
fly at dusk
and the green feathers
fall from the trees
I watched her
leather red lips
blow out
cotton ball clouds
And her marble
brown eyes
stare at the
blue eggshell sky
The sky is broken
she whispered
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Just a little something I thought up. I hope you like it.
 I enjoyed writing it. Comments
 I love this one.
-- I feel wicked. Thank you very much.
 -- ~I am a poet~ You're welcome.
-- I feel wicked.  Beautiful imagery. I especially liked the "green feathers" and "red lips" blowing out "cotton ball clouds."
-- Don't curse the darkness; light a candle. Thank you.
 -- ~I am a poet~  I like the repetition and nature theme in this. Good rhythm marked by a strong ending. Nicely done.
-- Only the stars see; only the moon hears. Thank you very very much for the favorite on it.
I appreciate it and your comment.-- ~I am a poet~ You're welcome; the favorite was much deserved.
-- Only the stars see; only the moon hears. That's very sweet of you to say, thank you.
-- ~I am a poet~ |
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