Which one appeals most to you? (Read first comment to see quote references after you vote!)

25%

7 deviants said You were a moment of kindness in an unkind world.

18%

5 deviants said Not crazy in a 'let's paint the kitchen bright red!' sort of way. But crazy in a 'gas oven, toothpaste sandwich, I am God' sort of way.

11%

3 deviants said Could you remove the tongue? Wouldn't your mouth be less bothersome without it?

11%

3 deviants said It wasn’t intentional for me to become a poet until we slumber-slept together.

11%

3 deviants said You are a world, my world, but this is only a layer.

2 deviants said They peppered his face like cinnamon on toast, sitting on the bridge of his nose beneath sad hazel eyes.

2 deviants said Well I've got news for you, Starshine, you're not the only one kneeling.

1 deviant said My pieces become so much less, Than the whole of me.

1 deviant said `How am I to get in?' -`Are you to get in at all?' `That's the first question, you know.'

1 deviant said I woke up to rain, a suburban rattlesnake rain and my eyes rained...a dilluted paper glue.

Devious Comments

=CartheInsane Oct 4, 2009, 11:15:10 AM

They peppered his face like cinnamon on toast, sitting on the bridge of his nose beneath sad hazel. eyes.[link] by *Miss-Deathwish

My pieces become so much less, Than the whole of me. [link] =th3krimzon1

"Not crazy in a 'let's paint the kitchen bright red!' sort of way. But crazy in a 'gas oven, toothpaste sandwich, I am God' sort of way.""Running with Scissors" by Augusten Burroughs

"Could you remove the tongue? Wouldn't your mouth be less bothersome without it?" "Girl, Interrupted" by Susanna Kaysen

`How am I to get in?' asked Alice again, in a louder tone. `Are you to get in at all?' said the Footman. `That's the first question, you know.' "Alice in Wonderland" by Lewis Carrol

Well I've got news for you, Starshine, you're not the only one kneeling. [link] by =Vindicta38

I woke up to rain, a suburban rattlesnake rain and my eyes rained...a dilluted paper glue. [link] by ~Aquastil

It wasn’t intentional for me to become a poet until we slumber-slept together. [link] by ~the-chemical-factory

You are a world, my world, but this is only a layer. [link] by ~Amertie

You were a moment of kindness in an unkind world. [link] by *Blueskye27

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~I am a poet~

*GoldenGirls Oct 4, 2009, 12:01:07 PM

You are so absolutely brilliant

xxxxxx

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You fill your day, most of the time, by being in the washing machine of your own mind, thinking “what’s this, when does it stop, am I enjoying it, I don’t know, oh it’s time to go to sleep, I can’t, I’m worried.”
- Dylan Moran